A prayer
from my heart to Lord's feet
A paper
I write love on in the street
I wish I could add a piece of me on the pages
I wish I could send you sunshine and canaries
A prayer
from my heart to Lord's feet
A flier
I picked up from ground of sad street
I wish I could have you dance on clouds and sing happiness from your eyes
I wish I could see you one day as the angel you are but without disguise
A prayer
from my heart to Lord's feet
A song
I sing for you, dear caress my heart don't beat
I know leaves will grow again and flowers will bloom
I pray that you hold on for the blessings and not settle for doom
Amen
Author notes
Please do watch the video. I decided to treat my readers and add the song that inspired and helped me to write this poem. Yes you wont understand it because its not in English but it will leave you wondering. Besides let the music and video take you away along with the poem lets see where you'll get. I need feedback on this. If you guys like this concept I can add my other poems like this as well so that every experience is mind blowing and unique. I want to leave an aftertaste in your hearts.
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Wonderful
I love this piece! It does feel incomplete. Maybe that is my own heart singing it's own tune. This song you appended is also an American hit "Unbreak my heart, say you'll love me again..." I am not sure of the name or the artist, but I know the words! lol Beautiful soulful song and your poem is beautiful and soulful as well. The picture of the hand reaching out and the song attached is a nice touch to your God loving poem.
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I' suggest it's good idea to speak to some one's heart..haa ? i love the song and it's amazing keep it up the good work !
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amazing!!!!!!!!!!
LOVE THIS
QUITE A SOULFUL PACKAGE
God bless you my friend...
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wow
This is truly inspiration and so uplifting. I'm going through a lot right now and this poem is a remind to who's there helping me along the way. -
That was absolutely amazing. You did a fantastic job, and it shows that you have a wonderful, beautiful, lovely heart and soul.
Thanks for sharing.
Write on.
~*~SP~*~
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Beautiful: Light, Love ...
but also powerful Faith. I loved this write, A. Thank you for posting this. The title is simply uplifting, too!
Love
Myra
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great job! love the song when it is in english......great write tho!
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Excellent
As usual, Your write is amazing. This is strong, emotional, and excellently penned. I loved it. Especially the last two lines.
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How sweet it is to see such a prayer from your pen, excellent verse and very strong emotional appeal this has.
Once again AJ you show us you have a gentle and caring nature and share with us more of it still.
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