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Kinetic Energy

You're so still
Are you afraid?
Don't be, my student
You're going to learn a lot today
So I'm going to spread my legs wide
And you will prepare your cock
To be layed by my dock

You're so still
Are you anxious?
Don't be, my student
You're about to learn more
Just put you cock
In my door

That's nice, my student
I rock my hips
You're quite smart

Are you coming yet, my student?
Because I'm almost there
Cum now, dear student
Or else I'll beat you there

Yes, you're coming
Now for the thrusting
A bit harder, my student
Make me swollen

That's excellent, my student
I'm practically bleeding

You did well, my student
And remember ...
When it comes to sex ...
You want kinetic

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  • madimar
    September 30
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    raw

    deffinitly suckish and wierd, and maybe kinetic. Erotica ? Keep in mind this type of poetry is not really my fortae.


  • AngelOfMourning
    September 29
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    science ... i can be such a nerd.