in the current

On the banks of the river

My soul fell in

It’s lost in the current

Of muddy waters

Ain’t no saving what’s been gone

Life preserver can float right on

On the banks of the river

My heart at my feet

I heard the words

He doesn’t love me

Now the flood

Covers the banks

Washes away

Memories made

Trees are shrouded

Cause love went away

on the banks of the river

I flowed alone

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By me, right now

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ms-cuddles
September 29, 2009

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i feel this
this hurts so good. i loved the flow and flood of emotions here. i hope this isn't you right now and you're just writing, cause i know how it feels to be told, i don't love you anymore and i'm in love with her. here's a shoulder my love if you need it. miss you loads. hugs~ Cuddles
faderman1959
September 29, 2009
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Beautifully sad, if you know what I mean? Its so full of emtion I could feel it!
Night Hope
September 29, 2009
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You're never truly alone, Sweetie. I'll help ya with the oars.