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Gentle Tones

Your voice haunts my mind-
Each perfect word you threw in my mind,
each perfect syllable you knew would stay...
That one night was a one time thing,
It's forbidden to be much more.
But what keeps me awake until 4 in the morning,
Is the thought of what if...
What if they,
Those authority figures who make such absurd rules,
were not in the picture?
Would you love me freely then?
What if we could flash our love to the people,
Didn't have to hide each time we simply wanted to touch each other,
kiss each other,
hold each other?
Would you love me freely then?
But that moment,
That one fateful and worthy,
yet heartwrentching moment-
is set against to be repeated.
But I don't believe it,
and I don't think you believe it either.
You want my touch as I need yours...
You need my kiss as I want yours.
But each hour ticks by as if seconds,
And the sun is peaking up over the horizon...
Your words still won't leave,
your memory too embedded within me.
I'm lost,
I'm haunted...

Author notes

"Mr. Happy Kitty ate yummy kitty food and clawed his way to the top of the curtains in the window while leaving a trail of M&Ms behind to find his way back to the litter box of gold."
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  • Darkmoon
    November 9
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    This is a wonderful poem. Very well written. Nice flow. Thanks for the entry and good luck.


  • Fallen Grace silver member
    October 26

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    This is beautifully written, You have an amazing piece here. I really like the part, "Your words still won't leave, your memory too embedded within me." I know that kind of feeling personally. Thank you for taking the time to enter my contest,
    Good Luck!

    Grace.


  • fairytalelovestory
    September 30
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    this is so very beautiful gl