Hello? Can't you see me?
I see you, sitting there in perfection.
What will it take for you to notice me?
How is it that you don't?
I need you to notice me...
Hearing your vioce always makes me melt.
Your eyes stop my heart!
This emotion radiates through my body,
What is it?
I need you, my illness is you
Not knowing I exist...
The only cure is you finally realizing that I am HERE!
I see you and my heart jumps!
Why do you only ask for the homework?
Ask me for my hand, my heart... my love!
Sitting in chemistry,
I can't believe we don't have it.
I've seen the girls you've dated...
All of them the same.
It saddens me to know
We can never be.
Tears roll down my cheeks,
But only when you don't
Notice me.
Author notes
when I wrote this, I wasn't expecting anyone to read it (it was in a journal before). When my friend (who is now my boyfriend) stole my journal, he finally realized that I have always been there for him, and that he loved me... and always will! Maybe it will work for you and someone you have a crush on! Good Luck!
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Comments
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This poem is awesome. Most girls in high school can probably relate to this, I know I can !!!! It hurts when you feel for someone and it is not returned.
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wow this is a woderful poem. its a feelin that most girls can mayb realte to. lovin someone nd they dnt even notice ur xistence
poem was great. =)
keep up the wonderful write
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