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Stripped

Your eyes are empty
Your heart is cold

They broke down your walls
Left nothing behind to save
You are not the same person
I will not leave.

I'll take you and hold you
I'll keep you warm
No matter how much you hurt
I will not leave

I am always open for you
Lay with me in the darkness
I hold you while the tears run down your face
I will not leave

The raging storm in your heart
It tells you to go
I will hold you close
I will not leave

I have fallen within you
Stripping you back to see your heart
I am part of your life now
I will not leave

I love you!

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  • ButILoveHer silver member
    October 6
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    really powerful love..


  • Grey.Area.
    October 3

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    All I can say is 'WOW'..................I wish I wrote with the same amount of depth and emotion as you, and wrote poems that make people feel the way your poem has made me feel.