Your eyes are empty
Your heart is cold
They broke down your walls
Left nothing behind to save
You are not the same person
I will not leave.
I'll take you and hold you
I'll keep you warm
No matter how much you hurt
I will not leave
I am always open for you
Lay with me in the darkness
I hold you while the tears run down your face
I will not leave
The raging storm in your heart
It tells you to go
I will hold you close
I will not leave
I have fallen within you
Stripping you back to see your heart
I am part of your life now
I will not leave
I love you!
Author notes
Any good? I don't know if it's what you wanted!
A contest entry
- All Over Me by ButILoveHer.
700 points, ended October 6, 5 entries
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Comments
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really powerful love..


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All I can say is 'WOW'..................I wish I wrote with the same amount of depth and emotion as you, and wrote poems that make people feel the way your poem has made me feel.



