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iron & wine innocent bones

soft calcium.
grinds against the bed posts.

dark red seeps through the floor boards.

glass shattered,
richoting from his broken words.

his broken valves.

his broken iris.

his broken mind.

again the bed creaks
as he heaves his heavy limbs upwards.

upwards and away,


[from the girl he just fucked]

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  • Sara Khan
    November 8
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    A unique poem with unique theme and unique treatment.