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You're the death of me

Couldn't you stay?
just a bit longer...
Prolong the suffering.
Why must you leave?
Why can't anyone know about this feeling between you and I?
Just come by the fire with me,
and play a while longer.
Because when you leave...
I become frayal.
the pain dosn't go away.
You are my only remedy.
Can I atleast have,
one last kiss..before we part..
and before I die.

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I think I'll just delete this...after the contest

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