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The Sun Tangoed

The pores pooled
as flesh, inhaled
the breeze that accompanied
the warmth of day;

Today, with its special
mission, poked fun
at itself as nature
continued to surmise
the beauty it had
yet to unfold;

upon its land
there lied,

framed
by bay and dew
a body
enraptured -

alone,

fabric- free
immersed
with life,

lifted

as the sun
tangoed
upon bliss
and its delight.

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The smell of the sun richotes across my limbs.

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  • apple cores.
    October 11

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    Did you reserve first or did you just use the title without reserving?

    If so, you were suppose to reserve and i was to prompt you with an individual prompt.


  • awannabepoet
    October 6

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    Oh dear me L.L. what beauty this poetry and yes the scent of the sun as it ricochets across the limbs could certainly bring some pretty pictures to mind.



    Thank you for sharing your wonderful talent and such great and funb poetry to read.



  • Desire gold member
    October 1

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    Oh My~

    This is a Beauty and Love then way You weaved Your words
    Pulls the Reader in and I could not help by smile
    Adore the Metaphors also the Images~
    Excellent~~

    Appreciate Your visit and comment on my work~
    Thankies for the time
    Keep that quill dancing

    Thank You for sharing Your Voice
    Best wishes in the contest
    with love & light~ Desire~*~


  • John Faulkner
    September 29

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    This is very creative and eloquent at the same time..I see and feel real beauty within it.You did well..Thans for this write

    John


  • michael thomas gold member
    September 29
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    Your poem does justice to the senses of sun.

  • mythologicalshapes
    September 29

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    I like the section of poking fun at one's self - if we can not do that in life then how can we laugh with others in life and find love and hope in people's eyes. I am new here, please visit one of my poems and if you care to, leave some thoughts. Thank you.

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