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Independent lust

Reap this fruit
If not devour
Take me upon yourself this hour

Shut out the light
Brush my skin with finger
Bring about intensity that lingers

Leave me longing for you
Pining away..
Lead my sensible hands astray

I want you
My body craves
So take this god damn breath away

I can smell the sex
Amongst dews of sweat
Lets not let passion ever forget

Me

Myself

And just I

After all…who needs a guy?

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  • such a unique take on the prompt! out of the box and very impressive!
    thanks so much for entering and best of luck in the contest...!

    love,
    becca

  • Aries gold member
    October 8
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    Great i loved the After all ......who needs a guy?
    Beautifuly penned an independent write!!


  • GothicFyre
    October 7

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    Beautiful, really beautiful. I really loved the last four lines, they were poignant and really sweet. I liked the way you structured it, well written.