I can’t always explain or refrain from the way
That I feel inside
I can’t find the words that would say
No matter how hard I try
I wouldn’t have believed or perceived
That it could get like this
Or that so many parts of a person
You could grow to miss
I feel like a slave to the day
When all I want is to sleep
How do I abandon the thoughts that I have
When they are all I have left to keep?
(chorus)
So here I go
Here’s my go at letting go
Because so far
It’s all that I wanted to know
How do I start or depart
From where I was before
Back to a time when I was fine
And yet so unsure
Pre-you
Is coloured blue
That emptiness…
At least it’s nothing new…
(chorus)
So here I go
Here’s my go at letting go
Because so far
It’s all that I wanted to know
So here I go..
I just wish it wasn’t so
There’s no way that I can show you
But here’s that love song
That love song
That love song…..that I owe you.
Comments
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did you really write this???? (if you did, compose a song. its good.) hmm, it is good i really like the chorus. i thik it is a beautiful poem. I would just change the end. but it is really good!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!You are awesome!!1 I love the title it is good. That is all that i have to complain about. seriously. you are good. Yours
LittleJay
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Hi, yes i did indeed. the first actual song i have written in a long time and i'm very pleased you like it.
to be honest it was very easy this time round because it is a very sincere piece of work,
thank you for your comment, much appreciated.
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