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The one I owe you (Letting go?)



I can’t always explain or refrain from the way

That I feel inside

I can’t find the words that would say

No matter how hard I try



I wouldn’t have believed or perceived

That it could get like this

Or that so many parts of a person

You could grow to miss



I feel like a slave to the day

When all I want is to sleep

How do I abandon the thoughts that I have

When they are all I have left to keep?

 

    (chorus)

So here I go

Here’s my go at letting go

Because so far

It’s all that I wanted to know



How do I start or depart

From where I was before

Back to a time when I was fine

And yet so unsure



Pre-you

Is coloured blue

That emptiness…



At least it’s nothing new…

 

    (chorus)

So here I go

Here’s my go at letting go

Because so far

It’s all that I wanted to know



So here I go..

I just wish it wasn’t so



There’s no way that I can show you



But here’s that love song



That love song



That love song…..that I owe you.

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  • LittleJay
    September 29

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    did you really write this???? (if you did, compose a song. its good.) hmm, it is good i really like the chorus. i thik it is a beautiful poem. I would just change the end. but it is really good!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!You are awesome!!1 I love the title it is good. That is all that i have to complain about. seriously. you are good. Yours

    LittleJay

    Keep writing!!!

    • Hi, yes i did indeed. the first actual song i have written in a long time and i'm very pleased you like it.
      to be honest it was very easy this time round because it is a very sincere piece of work,
      thank you for your comment, much appreciated.