Here I stand
Waiting for your sweet embrace
for you delicate fingers to trace
every inch of my body
To feel you breath on my neck
as I wait, with anticipation,
hoping you’ll leave your mark
So that I will have something to blush about
Here I stand
My body temperature rising
Responding to how your eyes
are piercing me
undressing me
Staking your claim
on me
Here I stand
Just waiting
wishing
wanting
for you
to push me
down
onto the bed
And
make love to me
Author notes
I do apologize for word spacing. Without a paid for account it is very hard for me to stagger my words as I please. I hope the desired effect still comes across.
Comments
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Piercing.
I love this. It's definitely more than intriguing. You had my heart beating with the breaks and I loved every second of it. It's definitely a great write and a beautiful emotion....<333333333333333
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Wanton desires always make for the best poetry. The spacing made the poem seem like heart beats that were excited and pulsing all over the place. I liked this and have had these feelings on many occasions. Great!
Much Love ♥
Renee
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Desirably passionate; the devotion and love felt between the two of you is breath taking in this piece, I think the spacing works well, it is as if you're breath is quickening with each thought Gorgeous
♥
Stay safe
Love ya
~Manda
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