trysts with love have somehow
always ended up with a stake in my heart
maybe its an unfeeling stone
i remember thinking clearly while salvaging it
i walked across the river seine
its waters gently lapping the paved banks
until the cruise ship muddled its soothing rhythm
why do we have cruise ships here?
its a sunny day and i am curled up on the chair
wishing the sun away
the heater is not working and
i am in no mood to even complain
i killed a rabbit today
Author notes
i am really sorry for this write.... just not into penning anything lately, yet i couldn't let your comment go unanswered.
- f o u r t h a x i s -
~WORD:
lackadaisical
A contest entry
- Extravaganza: Round 2 (invite only) by NoseRingGirl.
700 points, ended November 10, 9 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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wow
always lefta stake in your heart as you try to etrive frm the ruins. I liked this one.Normally it does happen to affect many. It seems. has it got anything to do with our desires to choose the best.get back to me and see if my poems hacve something similar -
Stop Apologizing!
Write it, let it go and, se where it sticks...GO Girrl
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please s p a c e out your name in your author's notes
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This is amazing, I don't understand how you can be so consistently good!
You picture painting is so perfect, I loved the third stanza especially.
Keep up the sheer awesomeness.
--Katie.
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