Limp, shredded,
Hordes of gnashing teeth,
Sharp overgrown nails,
Truth that spits like acid
I love him, I love him
But my words and actions fall flat,
His feet kick dust over the remains
I cannot breathe without him
And I’m told it’s such a shame
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I love how you always seem to tell so much with using very few words. I admire that a lot. And it makes me jealous
But I like this piece a lot. Well written indeed.
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Haha well thank you but you shouldn't be jealous, you're really good! Besides I can't really write much these days, it's like all the words have been sucked out of me >_<
Oh and sorry about the other day, I was so exhausted I didn't want to talk to anybody, but I'll text you later
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I'm not really good hahaha. It takes me a lot of words to express my meaning which I really wish wasn't the case...hence my jealously
And I didn't know what would be a good time to text you so I was iffy on texting you at all
But I'm sorry if I woke you and I'm sorry that you weren't really in the mood to talk, but you can text me anytime
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Don't be sorry, it's me who was cranky, I have a really mucked up schedule so I don't get much sleep and when I do I don't want the world to bother me I don't mind if you text me early of late or whatever though, next time I'll get up off my bum and text you back haha
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sad...very, very sad... but well written. You're doing well
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Thank you
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