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pockets

blinding
reservations well
waiting tell
to the untold
upheld
begotten reap

surreal
rounds stiffen
square
to the abstract

my second child
unnoticed
chose to learn

as I am coal...

 

 

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  • Nyafushia gold member
    November 10
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    nice


  • sheltered
    November 10
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    don't work?


  • Floorboards
    October 26
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    Lol, fookin' crazy dear boy, but I think i'm starting to understand now...


  • Swan song gold member
    October 10
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    this is not haiku sorry haiku only


  • Cannonsfire
    September 29
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    Feeling a little abstract and off the wall today?

    • sheltered
      September 29
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      xactly
      's been a while
      and how're you darlin'?


      • Cannonsfire
        September 29

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        I am doing just fine here,holidays in a day so all is good...my boys won the Grand Final in football on Friday so the whole weekend is a blur

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