Sitting next to you, yet feeling alone,
though you say you love me, it really doesn't show.
The touch of your hand, the look in your eyes,
empty and hollow as time slowly goes by.
You used to seem happy, your eyes had a glow,
what happened to you, my love, where did you go?
Your kisses aren't as loving, your words have no meaning,
when I look at you now, your a shell of empty feelings.
I miss the old you, the one who smiled and listened,
you force a fake happiness, your eyes don't even glisten.
My nights now aren't easy, I feel like I'm at fault,
maybe I am, maybe not, but tears fall to no halt.
My arms are always open for you, I am always there,
I love you to no end, my love, I love you and I care.
I hope you come back to me some day soon,
I will always love you, your my sun, stars and moon.
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I feel like there is a wall between my hubby and myself. I am possibly at fault for putting it there but then again I really don't know. It may just be the hard times we are having to deal with. He is definitely not the same as he used to be, but neither am I, I suppose. I can't wait till we can find each other again and things be like they used to. I miss his smile, his laugh, his care-free attitude. Now its like he just became a shell of himself and he is always depressed like something is bothering him constantly. I dunno..
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-Grace
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hey dis was grea8 i like da poem it also made feel lik crying as i read. it was sad tho. is he living far from u? i can see how much ya luv n care bout him, nd i wish he gets bak with all his depression gone. i lik dis rite. u seem a prety guud person.
btw if u wantt to knoe how i found you and how i got to read dis poem? thru Hope Angles page, i was reading sume of her poems and clicked on yur name on those commentz u left.
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Thank you for the comment. Hope Angel is my sister, I saw you tagged her page not to long ago. No, we live together, he just is somewhat distant once in a while with emotions. I dunno. Thank you
Grace.
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Beautiful
Amazing write. Very emotional and very open. I like it a lot.
Just a question...have you tried talking to him about this?
Well anyway..I really like the poem a lot and I hope things turn around for the two of you
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Yeah I have talked to him about it. It does help for a short period of time. But I am pretty sure that a lot of the problems have to a lot to do with our current situation. Thank you for the comment
Grace.
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love the rhyme..amazing write
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thank you
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