The brilliance of a lone light in a dark room
Your beauty illuminates all that is shrouded in night
Like a moth to a bulb, never quite reaching the light
but always drawn in
I can't seem to break the barrier between myself and the source of your light
but I can't help but try.
Like a moon to a planet, never quite reaching
but always drawn in
I grow closer by inches every day
because I can't help but try.
Your beauty reflects that of our ever-changing galaxy
The stars, the planets, the moons, working together as a whole
Author notes
This is my first attempt at a poem, so criticism is welcome!
I recently decided to try my hand at poetry, feel free to let me know what you think.
Comments
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I love this, it's beautiful.
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Hm, gave off the definate feel of natural... with the moth, planet...etc. I thought it was quite the lovely first write
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