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Chase the Dark away

When I look out the window,
I see the light appear,
It crushs all the darkness and shadows in its path,
I watch it as it moves about,
I sit there holding what little light i have,
And I feel the darkness pulling me in,
But I feel a warm hand grab mine,
Pulling me out and holding me dear,
The dark serounds us,
But the light radating off him keeps the shadows away,
They scream at him in pain,
Knowing they can never take me to their evil filled world,
They scream as he banishs them back to their world,
I sit there in his arms,
Feeling the warmth and love coming from him,
He is like the sun in my world,
I can hear his heart beat,
It is suthing,
I fall asleep and dream of a light filled world,
And he is always there waiting with open arms.

                          By: Chelsea M. Pelkey
                        For: Patrick T. Richmond

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