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sojourn


                             
         
on a journey to solitude
no compass needed

all i need

is above my head

a million stars

one true God



endless space



don't care how long the trip is
or where it leads
just know
it beats standing here
in the same spot
hurting






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  • PrInCeSsOfRoCk gold member
    September 30

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    definitely a powerful piece. just another awesome write hehehe. i wish i could say more about your pieces but really i just love them. always so easy to read and so well put together.


  • whitecoffee
    September 29

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    yes, very powerful. like your voice...very relatable feelings...nice one


  • tara wilson gold member
    September 28

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    very powerful. the need to move...to be anywhere that takes us away from the hurt. i love this. endless space and a million stars..i like your sojourn, hopefully one to lead you to happiness..


  • Oh.My.Juliet
    September 28

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    endless space, how true that is.
    great write! Keep writing!

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