It seems like when I try to tell you I love you,
You say it's not okay.
It seems like when I want you to see me,
You just look away.
When I try to talk to you,
You turn away.
Why do you do this to me,
I'll never know,
Do you love me? ,
I'll never find out,
Because through all my cries and broken down screams,
On calling your name,
You're just another broken promise to throw away...
Author notes
For you my love (James) Yes, he may be dead but I am still much in love with him. Madly in love with him. I can't get him out of my head. *sigh* It's hard to let go. I never forget one thing...Now where did I put that cookie??? lol just kidding. But really, I never forget anything...
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wonderful poem. sad but wonderful i hope this is not about you or someone you love i am sorry about you loss keep up the great work and thanks for sharing
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this is great...great emotion. best of luck
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I know the feeling.
Thanks for sharing your personal experience
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first off, just need a little fix. the last line: you have "your", i believe you mean "you're" aka 'you are'.
lovely poem on how love lasts even after death. it's a shame that you're 14, at a young age where sometimes people (yourself and or others) don't know if the love is real or if it's a crush/fling. either way, it's not always easy to be able to love someone after they have died and passed away. a sweet write poured from love's tears.
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