There are two sides of me-
talking to me, each in their own
seductive way.
"Go on, its okay.
Take up the blade again, It helped,
You know it did. Go on..."
And the other:
"Don't do it, they love you!
Dont return to the pit you
just climbed out of!!"
But...who do I believe?
And which one is the real me...?
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holy shit! no lie exactly what im going thru.. and as usual im listening to the side no one but me thinks is good. i feel like a a puppet. but that was absolutely perfect and i loved the format for the writing too
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been there before....great write
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I can hear your pain and turmoil in this write. I too think you've done a great job with this write.
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Now the self-harm subject is one I normally have no time for as it's been made cliche by whining teenagers. However, you've put an interesting angle on this and took it closer to original that I thought possible.
I like the way you portrayed the two "voices" and the confusion that often occurs regarding which side to turn.
I liked this. Thanks for sharing.
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