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The Ocean, Neverending

Written 08.15.09

I see the waves splashing
around my bare feet.
I feel the salty air
blowing through my hair.
The wet sand beneath me
is soft as can be.
The seagulls fill the sky,
then they land close by.
The ocean, neverending,
this world, never bending;
I think I'd like to stay,
if only for a day.

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