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In so Many Words

I'm wondering why you do it
Why you do the things you do.
I want to know everything
I only want the truth.
Where do i go,
you are my life,
if I could fast-forward time
I'd make you my wife.
Things are going crazy,
my world is no longer clear
everything is dark,
and my heart fills with fear.
You know that I've fallen
and I'm tumbling through the air,
I see you from a distance
but my vision has been impaired.
I no longer see you,
you are to far away,
I can hear your voice
and I hope it will stay.
I bought a one way ticket
and you're my destination,
my heart has stopped beating'
and you're my restoration.
I want to say "I love you"
but i don't want you to run,
just tell me how you feel
and my heart will be one.






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  • silenttears09
    September 29
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    awwww i teared up. this is beautiful