We don't look innocent-
But guilty isn't fitting
Filth surrounds the light
To contrast what we find is highest.
but tell me, sister dear; is this right?
Love elapses over time
To wrap theirselves round
What hearts cannot resolute
The color of our eyes are bleak.
Not of black and weak; but rather
Blue and deceitful.
(is this what you were waiting for? because obviously it's never coming.)
Author notes
http://ilayda-arts.deviantart.com/art/Samuzu-8-138533209
A contest entry
- *8 poets *8 trophies by AngelBellerose.
700 points, ended September 28, 8 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
What do you think?
Comments
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very interesting indeed i enjoyed the darkness behind this cool


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you penned this just fine
loved the way you took the prompt
and made it yours, bright the light
they were looking for thank you for penning
for me Hugs Angel♥

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Very beautiful work. I love the format, takes the reader for a ride
Good luck!
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thanks
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