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Nyx's ride.

I charter the midnight eloquence
with my lunar lead half mast,
through the salt and pepper
dust obscuring my old path.

Careening pinot noir stained
skies, like Poseidon they are
mine to stride, jaundiced trees
glow in the stellar bright, beacons
to guide my wayward hike,

Inhaling conscious minds, betiding
them with waves of dreams, dissuading
midnight stroves and rides; imbuing
thought  through tides of sleep.

like a truffle on the edge of humanity,
always have I stood in wait, to veil
obsidian blankets and prolong the Gods
cycle of night and day.

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  • glenn shannon silver member
    September 28
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    very cool dark and clever much enjoyed it


  • AngelBellerose gold member
    September 28

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    as i inhale the conscious mind
    to stimulate the dreams to find
    like a beacon of hope sends light
    for my wayward soul well penned
    I love the way you took this prompt
    and penned the spirit known
    thank you for penning for me Hugs Angel♥

    • Deindichter
      September 28
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      Thank you for creating the interesting pic/prompt. I'm glad to have entered


  • Oh.My.Juliet
    September 28

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    I love your language! Great work, good luck!

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    • Deindichter
      September 28
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      Thank you for the read, I'm glad you found something of it to your liking

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