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Colors

I watch as the plane sets its golden stream
I watch as the moon gives its silver gleam
I watch as the fire gives a blazing roar
I watch as the water splashes upon the shore
All the colors move forwards and backwards
But my soul stays still as I lay on the sand downwards

Author notes

Just a little short thing I did at school today during study hall. I definately think I could expand this or maybe redo it without the rhyming because it would probably give more colorful images if I did that.

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