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You know this is about you.

Just let her go
You cause her pain
Why are you in this
With so little gain?

Can't you see the hurt
You've made behind her eyes
Can't you hear the little truth
Behind all of her lies?

You call her names
And you call her down
Stop playing your stupid games
And let her heart unbound.

She tries so hard to make you happy
But all you want is her love



NOT DONE, KTHX.

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  • prankstar
    November 24
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    wow...this is really good. really krystal.