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From the Heart

Deep inside I don't want to do this but I know I have to
I have to find out if they really care
I slit my wrists and let the blood flow from my heart
I hear a car and I know my mom is home

She comes in the front door
and sees me on the kitchen floor
She just shakes her head and calls the EMTs
They arrive and lift me into the ambulance with ease.

I feel myself sinking deeper into the darkness
It is an empty nothingness
I know at once that I am alone
They don't care if I don't return...so I don't.

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  • kryz
    September 28, 2009
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    Wow this is very deep. It flowed so well keep up the great work