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Poison

There is a poison that flows within me.
          Evil that emanates from me.
  It flows through my veins.
            It poisons my thoughts.
It distracts me from living.

    It confuses me,
My mind is so muddy,
    filled with this poison.

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Sin makes things look good, or easy, but actually it is a poison that slowly kills.

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  • Walls-within
    September 28

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    You wanna know something? You are the one person who has no reason to think this. You try so hard, and maybe you only see this sin within you. If you can move on, I'm sure God will to, stop lingering on old sins, and move on with life. That is my advise. I spend too much time consumed by the past. Don't let that happen to you.


    • momwitzman
      September 28
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      We all have sin my dear. God looks at sin all the same, one isn't worse or better than another. I just struggle with a different one than you, or not.