ticket in hand
itinerary
plans
assumptions make fools
of naive men
don't you see him
the shaggy jackass
always braying for the carrot
too far ahead of the cart
what a fool believes
in pots of gold
hearts and rings and meaningful things
belong in others worlds
this afternoon
i listen to frogs sing
a new tune
regret
regret
regret
i lay no claim to the rain
or the frogs
or her
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wow awesome work! really loved the clever use of regret as the sound of frogs. very original. great piece.
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I really enjoyed this.
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it is as real as it gets
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totally loved this from beginning to end...so much in it. you're great.
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