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really creepy poem to the guy who lives next door

hey, guy who lives next door to me in the dorm with the paper-thin walls.
i think i totally dig you.
well, i know i totally dig you,
and i want to see the inside of your room,
and be your friend, and have you play songs all the
effing time. because you're good.
you're not good solely because of your technical ability,
you're good because you play without caring that anyone can hear you.
and because of your moderate technical ability.

are you ready? cuz the poem is about to get creepier.
i wanna date you so effing hard.

So, what do you think?

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  • Kaite Zampa
    October 2

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    by the way, you're last line "i wanna date you so effing hard" just about sums up everone's feelings at some point or another. officially my favorite line


  • Ohms Law
    September 30

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    This isn't your usual abstract, poetic, whatever it is you usually do type poem, but I still like it!


  • heidisawesome
    September 28

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    This is soooooo good. I'm so jealous of this man because you're going to get on that.

  • Kaite Zampa
    September 28
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    I LOVE YOU FOR THIS.
    i think everyone has a poem like this inside them. maybe multiple ones.