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Marionette

In this life
we are only puppets on a string
marionettes for pain and pleasure
these ties that bind cannot be truly measured

It God or is it Devil?
however you may see..
For there is no good or evil
nor right or wrong.
only points of view and how  you sing your song

we are like an Ocean's tide
constantly pushing and pulling

pushing away the ones we love
while desperately pulling them in
Drowning them in our own sorrows
Because Misery loves it's company...

Author notes

i've have the puppets on a string idea floating in my head for a while...
and the other night i finally wrote on it...

tell me how this made you feel

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  • Mrs. Kodak
    November 20
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    This made me sad...but i like it. It was a really good write, despite the sad feeling that is lolz. But yeah I'm glad I clicked your page and read this it was a really good write, and I thoroughly enjoyed it keep it up

  • Kat90
    October 11
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    wow this is amazing...i am speechless...keep it up


  • Silences Voice
    October 10

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    Interesting

    I'm not sure if this is the one you read me last night, because I was a little out of it last night, but I like it. Its really good. It made me feel like a puppet being told what is really going on and making the puppet want to cut the strings and be done.

    Very nicely done Caseybear.
    love you

    ---Cookie---


  • dynosaurusmex1
    October 5
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    it's amazing

    i really love it. you're an amazing writer. keep up your amazing works of art.


  • Emerald-Spirit
    September 29
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    The idea in your head made a great poem I love the last stanza, so true! Great comaparison. Xds-gX


  • VidaBella17
    September 28
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    I love this. Absolutly love it.
    Amazing.

  • RainbowXButterflies
    September 28

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    It was bittersweet because i know exactly where your coming from.
    I love it. Your so creative this week its awesome.

    When i saw y our new poem I gasped out loud and (considering i was in english and not evens supposed to be on this site) I got a couple looks


    I was gonna call you but its to late and i've been getting home late -_-


  • Mistress Masquerade
    September 28

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    I love it, the theme of puppets is well presented here. Great write. I love everything you tied into this poem, the emotion was so strong. Can't wait to read more.

  • Moon Raven
    September 28

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    I love this. Very interesting ideas about living life on a strings of pain and pleasure, and the points of view. Those ideas combined with your awesome way with words is amazing. Keep it up


  • Sea-Shell
    September 28
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    Lovely written. The idea is amazing and true.

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