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RIde On

Riderless horse
White
Broken reins flying
Green eyes wild
Chilling poetic metaphor
Manifested in flesh.

Past my arrival point
swiftly through woods
Collided with you
on the path
where you stood.

Contemplating death.


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  • quietly burning
    September 28

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    wow .. DARK ! there are things in this world that are not understood. sometimes just move on and let them go. rather like the headless horseman. nice to see you.