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Fallen Angel

A Fallen Angel she must now be,
Hidden beyond the universe so no one can see,
Her angry soul, her blood stained tears,
The secrets filled with darkness that she has carried for so many years.
It is not her fault she is this way,
She was just in the wrong place one fateful day,
And now she will never be the same,
For she screams in anger, she is chained forever in this pain.

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  • light to a dreamer gold member
    October 11
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    Very well done with much thought and feeling. This is sad and makes you think Wonderful write.


  • ShaShay
    October 11

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    Do not be ashamed or feel chained. I know where ths comes from and it is more destructive than the original act could ever be to you. Hold your head high and keep writing.
    Congrats on the engagement. I'm very happy for you.
    This is a very heartfelt piece. Short and meaningful. Thank you for sharing.
    Sharon


  • Oh.My.Juliet
    September 28
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    Very dark, the ending makes me think. And so many pictures. Amazing work

    Keep writing!

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