Darkness consumes the soul of the night,
As she spreads her wings and begins her flight.
To unfold the secrets whispered through her heart,
Her journey to freedom is about to start.
She has waited too long to find her key,
To unlock the secrets and fly so free.
But now is her time to take her last breath,
As she falls so heavy, to her death.
What did you think
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I had to read this through 3 or 4 times to really appreciate everything about it.
I like how it's atypical to the norm of "rapturous" flight.
Short and powerful, great work.
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