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We always have tomorrow

Breath in...

don't look behind you
your life lays ahead

follow the road to where the sun sets
and
go where the wind takes you,
there you will find yourself

your spirit guides you,
watches
and
protects you

now follow the road
don't look behind
leave the past forever
because...


we always have tomorrow


Author notes

This poem is based on a woman leaving her deadbeat violent boyfriend.

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  • rbruce gold member
    November 4

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    terri, it doesn't really matter what your poem is based on, it is sound and practical advice for anyone to think about. Very strong, very practical, very true and very well written.


  • Sector-Hunter silver member
    November 3

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    I think this is a strong poem. When you are with someone that treats you bad you need to get away. I love the flow of this it is soft but it adds somewhat. Thank you for reading one of my poems that means a lot I really enjoyed this SH


    • xxBlack Dawnxx
      November 3
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      your very welcome and thank you for returning the favor,
      i normaly write bdms/erotic pieces but just decided to do something little different, thank you for commenting im glad you enjoyed it


  • Frogzter gold member
    October 13

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    Follow the road wherever it may lead and never look back on abuse. Thanks for your entry. A different take on the prompt than most, but I can see it for sure.

    Frogz~

    • xxBlack Dawnxx
      October 19
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      hey sorry it took me so long to reply, ive just got back from holiday, thank you for taking the time to comment
      Terri.


  • theaceofspades
    September 29
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    wow, this is very deep.

    • xxBlack Dawnxx
      October 19
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      sorry its took me so long to reply ive just got back of holiday i'm realy glad you like it, thank you for comenting


  • AmbiguousDesire
    September 29
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    Great!

    love it

    • xxBlack Dawnxx
      October 19
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      sorry its took me so long to reply ive just got back of holiday, thank you for comenting, and im realy glad you enjoyed it

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