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of soaps and memory

grandmother died
before the jet to denver

her stories

guiding light
like sands through glass in
droplet muse

elizabethan clutch
lay by her mirror

A contest entry

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  • Angela Maria gold member
    November 23
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    Very nice!!!! Congradulation's!!!. Thank's for commenting on my poem


  • cvillelisa
    November 16

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    OMG. My mother watched Guiding Light for 50 years.!!!

    last two lines are very evocative. Congrats on the Gold...

    Hope you are well and thanks for the visit!

    Best,
    Lisa


  • epitome
    October 7

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    gorgeous.
    I don't know if you've looked at what I've written before, or what I chose as a winner in my last few contests, but this is what I love. It kind of reminds me of my poem Wings, please Mr Literature:
    http://allpoetry.com/poem/5622655
    absolutely stunning, love the last image.