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Madame Guillotine dirty pretty poem

                 .:.*.Madame Guillotine.*.:.

even more *i*n*f*a*m*o*u*s* than the ***moulin rouge***
*Madame* she should not be called because her +++sins+++ are so hudge
Her home is like *Versailles* ,home of .*duchesses*. and .:.*.queen’s.*.:.
.*Lavish*. .:.*.taffeta.*.:. (gowns)

                        ^hang^ on her {frame} that !s /slender/ and [lean]
)x(Corset)x( so tight that she can almost faint . k
Emotions [{(masked)}] under *shimmering* powder and white paint
~perfume~ so strong and ~ribbons~ so tight
within her *mysterious* eyes there is a .s.i.n.f.u.l. sight  
expensive .*.*.*gold*.*.*. and gem jewelry with weight
she ***poses*** in a |proper| manner and puts up her -f-r-o-n-t- by _s_t_a_n_d_i_n_g_     up                |straight|
.:.*.Snobbish pursed lips colored scarlet red.*.:.
Her >reaction< to her unhappyness it to say 'off with their head'
she is the #vampy# version of .:.*.Marie Antoinette.*.:.
i!i!i!ipaintsi!i!i!i the [s][q][u][a][r][e][s] _floor_ with .:.*.blood.*.:. and kills once she is set
she's on ***parade*** like a xxXxXxprostitutexXxXxx dressed for [{(masqued)}] o0o0oballso0o0o
but soon :::justice::: will be served and yaweh our .:.*.God.*.:. will judge her when she f

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.:.*.OfF WiTh HeR hEaD.*.:. will be shouted by the crowd for all her mess
The xXinnocentXx people want her to +=+confess+=+
her sins are gre@t & she needs to %apologize% to all
or get what she deserves once the ***silver*** guillotine falls
finally no more .:.*.Madame Guillotine.*.:.
selfish, sinful , |[{(masuqed)}]| and mean. k

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  • Cassie fai lume
    November 10
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    I like it. Not every kind of poem has to be an original to be good.
    Dirty pretty's pretty bad ass so who cares what other people think.


  • DraidenGunGiest
    November 8
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    --.--

    What the fuck is wrong with you people ? ... This is insanity ! Giestecca Denon Fen Hiest ... I think I'm going to puke --.--


    • katik
      November 9
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      Every one likes differnet things . shush up.
      this poem got gold and silver , you may not like it ,so keep it to your self, its a new style called dirty pretty ,i know its strange the fisrst time you read it , aand i agree it is not a calssic style of poetry, go and rant to who invented it . thanks for your honesty though =)
      byyyyyyyyye k


      • DraidenGunGiest
        November 9
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        Such drivel ... such absolute drivel , this is a travesty . In the Absolute --.--


  • Fallen-Thumper
    November 7

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    thank you for entering

    i really love this piece and i seem to love this dirty pretty poem a lot. Amazing and a brilliant write. Fantastic!
    good luck and thanks for entering!
    -penguin-


  • Kathraina silver member
    October 20

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    This makes me think of Marie Antoinette.
    Interesting write....i really reminds me of another piece I just read by "fairy princess k"
    Your styles are...well to be frank exactly the same.



    bravo and thank you for entering



    ♥ kate


  • katik
    October 20
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    hey

    thank you heaps fairy princess k for teaching me how to write in this wonderful style =)

  • fairy princess k
    September 29

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    Hey

    Kool poem =) , i like there lines- .:.*.Snobbish pursed lips colored scarlet red.*.:.
    Her >reaction< to her unhappyness it to say 'off with their head'
    she is the #vampy# version of .:.*.Marie Antoinette.*.:.
    i!i!i!ipaintsi!i!i!i the [s][q][u][a][r][e][s] _floor_ with .:.*.blood.*.:. and kills once she is set
    she's on ***parade*** like a xxXxXxprostitutexXxXxx dressed for [{(masqued)}] o0o0oballso0o0o
    but soon :::justice::: will be served and yaweh our .:.*.God.*.:. will judge her when she f

    a

    l

    l

    s
    .:.*.OfF WiTh HeR hEaD.*.:. will be shouted by the crowd for all her mess

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