grief waits behind the lyrics of a song
an ambush arranged in arpeggios
and it pounces when your face is evoked
i miss you
From my heart to your eyes
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this is sweet!
raw and emotional, i love it! to miss is to know love...
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thank you =]
-K
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omg...I love this I love Love Love this...so short yet so huge..and god have I like every one else been there,,,,,This is awesome
Take a bow my poet friend
T
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i took a bow and hit my head on my desk.... just kidding hehe....
you might enjoy this video
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=q6C_WSp3Lks
Much love to a great poetess!
-K
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Bravo!
Short & potent poem packed with pathos & a plethora of emotion. 
Great content, flow & word choice. I love the alliteration in line two! All the best in your pining. 
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Thank you Ma'am
-K
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This is a very well-written poem. Thanks for the read!
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Thanks for the read and comment! I appreciate it =]
-K
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an ambush arranged in arpeggios!
That's freaking brilliant! This is nother great poem! The only question I had was about evoked . . . .is there a better word for what you want to say. Just thoughts!
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It was the best word I could think of- I was visualizing a wizard summoning a demon when that line was written, lol.
Thanks so much for reading and commenting! Glad you enjoyed it ^_^
-K
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whoops
I forgot to give you points. I really love this"an ambush arranged in arpeggios" beautiful...for somereason I hear a wind chime whenever I read it.
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Thanks for reading and commenting =] I'm really glad you enjoyed it!!
-K
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perfect
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I love music, it makes you feel.
good job
rabbit
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It does indeed, dear Uncle =]
-K
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aaww..
my friend, this is
hope it's a creative thing you're doing..
i like the write though!
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i got ambushed by a song that reminded me of my late grandfather last night.....
Thank you for reading and commenting
-K
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