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Real

Your eyes stay open

and you wish your mind will close.


I dont want to see
the blood on his hands
  and the horror he endured
because even if no one is real
and everyone exists,



he is there,  on the page

living, breathing, thriving
and developing on his own

(doesn't that make him real?)



doesn't that make his pain real?

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Im reading a series and one of the characters... is just.... so real.... and his pain is like, pounding through my brain and heart crying out in little whispers of bloodied fingers and falling bodies.

(the book is Tsubasa Resovoir Chronicle by CLAMP by the way, its a manga series and absolutly asstouding)

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  • Sheilasbabygal4life gold member
    September 28

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    This was really good and very moving. I enjoyed reading this!I would have too say that this is my favorite part:

    I dont want to see
    the blood on his hands
    and the horror he endured
    because even if no one is real
    and everyone exists,

    But overall this was great. I enjoyed it


    • frozenblackpetals
      September 28
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      thank you!! ^^ it was kinda a "I have to get this feeling out of me before I explode!" type of poem, so I wasn't expecting people to get it, or like it for that matter, ^_^
      im glad you enjoyed it.