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Whispering Wind

Whisper softly blows the wind
  Heard in the dark of night
I listen for the words she speaks
Spoken from the fire light
Pages from the times lost
Her heart holds the key
Interlocking deep in my soul
Now where the wind is free
Give with a touch of Love

Walking with the soul of man
Into the dreams she moves
Now then my soul understands
Dreams of Whispering winds





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  • Cynthia Gaines gold member
    November 8
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    Beautifully Sentimental & Heartfelt!!

    Soft as a feather, your words whisper in a magical way that are so inspirational... Thank you once again for sharing your wonderful poetry with all of us. I do hope to see your book one day soon!! You take care, I'm wishing you all the best!! Keep it flowing, Poet...
    Peace,
    Cyn


  • Lady Altheia
    October 26

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    Hoodwink 143

    Your poems are beautifully written. i feel like i am floating on a cloud when I read them. The first two I read had a connecting theme. You have been hoodwinked because someone cared about you.


  • Manda Kathryn Greeters member
    October 23

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    Hood-Wink!

    What a beautifully romantic poem that touches the heart softly with elegance and whispers The title is perfect for this; the final line - perfection


    Stay safe
    ~Manda
    Apologies on the late Hoodwink!


  • Haiku-bless-you silver member
    October 22

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    HOODWINKED !

    This is a lovely poem with a gentle and graceful poise. It dances as light a a summer breeze across the sleepy blades of grass at twilight. If this is a tribute poem to Whispering Wind it is beautiful and fitting for this fine poet and friend. Write on dear poet!

    You have been Hoodwinked today by the Poetic Bandits because WE CARE!

    God Bless!

    Dennis


  • Whispering Wind Moderators member
    October 13

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    O" this is so beautiful..i feel the tears stinging my eyes...like a soft and gentle whispering wind..you na friend have a heart of gold and i adore you for it


  • Sandygram
    September 29

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    So Beautiful

    The title is so lovely and your words draw me in life a soft whispering breeze. This was delightful and so full of love. Stunning imagery to. Words to get lost in., Thank you for always brightening my day with your friendship and amazing poetry. Take care John. Hugs and smiles dear friend.

    Blessings and Love,
    Sandy


  • kiwigirljacks gold member
    September 28
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    So softly done.. a beautiful breeze indeed to fill the soul. Oh for such a love to be as this! Lovely John.


  • StormGoddess Greeters member
    September 28
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    Something soft and peaceful felt here. I can almost feel the winds you speak of. Beautifully done hun,

    Storm

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