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your alcohol affect

your words; an assortment of liquor
a shot at this, a shot with that
the more you say, the heavier the buzz
you can find me where you make me feel
a place so lonely, a rock under moonlight shores
push me closer to the waves
leave the waters all your whispers

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  • humblpye gold member
    September 29

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    Fave lines here ; 'you can find me where you make me feel'
    'push me closer to the waves, leave the waters all your whispers' Ali, i'm not sure if this is a hurting poem or a love poem...?


    • Ali - Pie
      September 29
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      hey john, its more of a hurting poem but everytime i start a poem i always end of writing of something else towards the end cause i always have a hundred things on my mind but thank you for your kind comments!