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Psylocibin

We find these dissident things unimportant
we know they are one
we can't find this anywhere else.
pass past the path
flash past the proof,
I have to get drunk,
I can't explain what I'm saying
where's the truth in what you're saying
is your doing so true
Don't we all lie here in this fertile pasture
stinking of rotting mushrooms
and dying of life
I know I do.

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Video coming in a few hours...it's not great yet...but holds video

Pretty in Chaos.

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  • acari27 gold member
    September 29

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    for me its read too fast plus the sounds not clear-how do you do the sound for the utube vids you picking up both externally with one mic? or you got tracks you overlaying in a sound program ? forgive me i dont post vids on utube im ignorant


    • neurosine gold member
      September 29
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      I did the audio track using a virtual Korg MS-20 adding vocals to the synth effect, then recorded the voice over and mixed it in Adobe Soundbooth, then just recorded some video and rendered it all in Adobe Premiere. It's all a learning process for me.
      Yeah, I haven't found my voice reading, singing, whatever...I have nerdo-spasmosis. I can't shake it without heavy sedation, but then I can't do anything else.

      • acari27 gold member
        September 30
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        you read good-i liked one you did a lot-thought you sounded bit like cohen yes? but you read that one more slowly more purposefully than here and it sounds clearer

        • neurosine gold member
          September 30
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          I may do it over. I've been playing with some video effects and may recreate and tweak the audio...Mini project. It's a great compliment to be told you sound a bit like Leonard Cohen. ...Give me a Leanord Cohen afterworld so I can sigh eternally....


  • acari27 gold member
    September 29
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    ive tried both and mushies AND god-now thats the SHIT


  • myrataal silver member
    September 27

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    Interesting as always ...

    but no shrooms or drugs or intoxication of whatever matter or substance can bring the same transcendence than divine Love.

    I dare you to try.

    Love
    Myra

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