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Enter the moment you want to forget.








Sashaying, a little too much rouge and catching
all the attention. You can almost envision
a push-up bra and some lacy under-
things, blowing kisses as it passes by.
You divert your eyes
like you do for homeless children and burn victims.
Almost ashamed, almost a train wreck.

Steps on your feet, prancing with attention-whore
glory and titters behind its hand at your
little mistakes as if it wasn't a party to them
but you know, this moment
this brazen display of immodesty working the room
before you

is everything that makes you cringe, slinking
into corners and slips of shadows--
creates those downcast eyes that know the shapes of people's
feet more than the shade of blush
when you look directly at them. Those hurried
excuses. And you try to talk the moment down

soft voice and caressing words

but it's more cocaine than Valium, speed-balling right
into the spotlight and looking to give rise

to scandal more than

 

looking
for an apology.




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Comments

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  • -ButterflyCuts-
    September 30
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    little visit and a little hug for you

  • tara wilson gold member
    September 28

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    what an ability you have to bring the reader right into the poem, to really experience it, and you speak to the reader as if they were in their moment, any moment, we'd want to forget and you make us feel that. so well written, this is gooooood poetry, a pleasure to read.


  • Night Hope gold member
    September 28

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    Well, if this is a train wreck, then I'm one of those sick puppies who stops to watch the action. What a powerhouse of a penning, Mel. How wondrous to see a new posting from you, Sweetie. Do more, pleeeeeease???


  • Rowan gold member
    September 28

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    But you make it look easy...
    What a title! What a write! Good to see you back, you've been missed.
    hugs


  • NurseChilly gold member
    September 28

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    i think i've been her in the past... all vim and vigour...
    oh well

    lololol
    good to see you back writing hun.. indeed


  • Randomly Beautiful
    September 28

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    Never for you. This reminds me of too much. Nice to see you post.

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