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It's Getting Cold In June

stars doth cross an angels weave
to dim the sun and watch him bleed
the stars are raptures to bust a hole
throughout the world and end its soul
its like i said before:
(everything starts with tragic lines)

i know, that you know-
(but what does it take to clear the space)
and life here as you know
(is starting to bore me leave this place)
but look through a thousand tears
i know now that everyone
is sick of my complaining
and truth is I'm agreeing...
i know, that you know-
(i'm sick of us debating)
and I feel I must know
(if you will hold me baby)
it's cold here in june
oh, without your warmth to pass the time
but once its mine, i hope that i won't feel this again...

(instrumental)

poignant at best and i must see
if i could be there to help you free
the soldiers are marching towards a wall
jerico falling to warn us all
it's like i said before:
(everything goes with tragic lives)

i know, that you know-
(but what does it take to clear the space)
and life here as you know
(is starting to bore me leave this place)
but look through a thousand tears
i know now that everyone
is sick of my complaining
and truth is I'm agreeing...
i know, that you know-
(i'm sick of us debating)
and I feel I must know
(if you will hold me baby)
it's cold here in june
oh, without your warmth to pass the time
but once its mine, i hope that i won't feel this again...

(instrumental)

i know that you know- (x4)
but its kinda hard to say the word

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  • XRainbowliciousX
    November 19
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    aww. It's kind of sweet in a weird way I guess....but anyways I like the writing...it's amazing. You sing good, but I would watch the high's lol....If you had music and sung it would be freakin sweet.


  • Tinselpool
    September 28
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    wow that was so good i just listened to it!!!

  • Tinselpool
    September 28

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    that was fantastic i'd love 2 know how it really sounds

    claire


  • shattered.frisco
    September 28
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    sounds like you say juno..not june oh
    but i love this...sooooooooo much. more clapies

  • shattered.frisco
    September 27
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