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life

this experience called life
is our inheritance of grace
from those preceding us

to those that follow
our bequeathing of grace
is this experience called life

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  • rhondasail
    November 11

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    I still like this one...kind of like cosmic recycling, very good for the whole universe...Peace always Alan, Rhonda


  • rhondasail
    October 12
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    OHM.....


  • Cynthia Gaines gold member
    October 10

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    Thank you for your entry...

    Life passed on down the line, in all its human facets... Good work!! I'm wishing you all the best, Poet!! Keep it flowing...
    Peace, Love & Hugs,
    xx Cyn xx


  • Goddess of illusion
    September 29

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    Short and sweet... I just sat here speechless. The way you weave your words my dear friend,to form the picture crystal clear in a mind, it is truly always amazing...

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  • Amera gold member
    September 29

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    Love this as it made me think. Are we actually bequeathing grace?

    Love,
    Amera


    • PerVirtuous
      September 29
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      We have no choice. We do not consciously design our children, the ability is a gift.


  • kiwigirljacks gold member
    September 28

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    Let's hope we bequeath grace to those that follow. I choose not to have children because I felt there was so little in the world to pass on that was good.

    Lovely write

  • Purrsanthema
    September 28

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    Beautiful, meaningful and exquisitely elegant in its construction! How very true: and how greatly we humans have not learned it yet!


  • Denerica
    September 27

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    Always to thank him no matter what life dealts us...excellent and profound. Blessings.

  • siahaan
    September 27

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    this experience called life
    is to help each other when they're feeling down
    to light the way and to give thanks to the almighty

    that's the closest thing I can get..lol

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