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If you please, i'm a tease

Send a rush trough my body
send a rush to my brain
look deep into my eyes
as you stand between my thighs
penetrate it deep
make my juices flow and seep

slap my face and make me moan
bite my nipples make me groan
with your tongue flick my bean
lick my pussy till its clean
stick your cock up my bum
fill it with hot and salty cum

ile not stop till you say
yes sir i will obey
if you please, I'm a tease
now put me on my knees
in my mouth stick your dick
i love to suck and lick
a mouth full of cum
oh sir that was so yum

now if you please I'm a tease

now give my arse a squeeze


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  • Lovely Undead
    November 8
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    wow was all my hubby could say as he read this lol


  • spideracer gold member
    November 4

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    Wow! You do erotic so well, felt a little movement down below while reading this sexy poem. Only one word, not a misspelt one but I think you meant to say ''through'' and not ''trough''. Gosh you're a naughty girl, wanna cum play with me? lol! Talk about standing tall...truly a very pleasing poem to read.


    • xxBlack Dawnxx
      November 4
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      im glad have that effect, but baby if i was to come and play i'm sure ide leave you screaming oh and talls good it means my poetry and thoughts are working
      thank you so much for helping out with my spelling mistakes, thats the one thing i'm not good at


  • Sector-Hunter silver member
    November 3

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    I tell people this all the time some people can pull off some of the words you have in this and some cant. You can pull them off with easy I see. This had me standing tall so to say. Wonderful poem SH

    • xxBlack Dawnxx
      November 4
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      im realy pleased you like this piece glad my words can have that effect to


  • AmbiguousDesire
    October 11
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    Freaky deaky


  • firion
    September 27

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    *squeezes your cute lil bum*
    amazing write though by now i expect no less
    if you dont mind now lets undress

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