In silence, there is absence
And in absence there is question
How do you walk along
When your heart is infested?
With all the petty promises
The safety that I lived in
A flame held in my hand
Now I hold your very sin
You remind me of the fire
Get too close, and you'll get burned
Hope to have a match ready
To let the flame return
commence, pretend I'm not alive
I'm not here, anyway
Commence, pretend I'm not awake
And take away your name
[chorus]
But I'm here and breathing
My own life this time
I will not be repeating
Our old, tragic line
I dont want the attention
I just want to shine
And be inside the light I've designed
[verse 2]
They say no regrets
The past is just a key
To live a present in the making
Of a future lived happily
I never meant to hurt you
Or destroy who you are
All I wanted was to save you
All I did was give my scars
[chorus]
But I'm here and breathing
My own life this time
I will not be repeating
Our old, tragic line
I dont want the attention
I just want to shine
And be inside the light I've designed
[close]
And here we'll be
Or here alone
You'll never known
What you have shown me
Who I want to be
Author notes
And here it is...Im still not sure what its about....
Comments
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I'm not sure where you're taking it, but I'm liking it so far. Is it a song? There is such a elegant tone of angst and a tinge of romanticism. I hope later on I'll get what the title means. Overall though, I think this poem is about some type of love, like lost love, maybe betrayal? In the third stanza with the fire, I'm getting a feel of revenge. Needless to say, the imagery is great, "In silence... question" are really great lines. Continue on, this is promising.


