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you hurt me

As I sit here looking out my window
A glisten of light shines
Down on your face
Your walking down the road
The rain hitting you
No one can see the tears
Mistaken for the raindrops
You look up at my window
With a look of regret
Knowing that you hurt me
Than I was in pain
Just seeing you struck my heart with fear
I tried to look away
You small blue eyes pulling me in
I take you back
And once again
You
Hurt
Me


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