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Sunrise, a cinquain

Sunrise
painting sky
just like autumn
ending summer, ending night
sunrise

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  • WordsArentEnough
    October 7

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    After reading that last poem, this too reminds me of longing, almost as if you wish that sunrise would really end the summer, and bring something new. This one is tinged with hope though, while that last one was more passive. There seems to be a theme recently...? Hopefully you get what you're waiting for. I'll leave the rest to the goofy clapping guys.